日期：2008-07-29 Test3 Our declining environment may bring the people of the world together as no politician, philosopher, or war ever could. Environmental problems are global in scope and respect no nations boundaries. Therefore, people are faced with the choice of... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 Test2 The media (books, film, music, television, for example) tend to create rather than reflect the values of a society. 6 For our grandparents it occurred through films and books. For the baby boomers it was a result of television and revolutionar... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 test1 Both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing. 6 Technology, broadly defined as the use of tools, has a long history. Ever since... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 Original: Modern people receive vast news and information of many kinds every day and are so overwhelmed by these factual news that they are not think much about larger issues or from overall perspectives. Revised: Modern people are therefore overwhe... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 写作词汇 Original: To begin with, in our era, all kinds of information and messages are booming everyday. Revised: In our times, we are exposed to a great deal of information. Original: Maybe in some urgent conditions, political leaders have to withh... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 修改范例 One type of law that requires civil disobedience is any law that breaks our basic moral code. Laws that are unjust to one segment of society, that discriminate, repress, disenfranchise, and take the lives of one group in society are worthy... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 第二篇 Attitudes Towards Two Types of Law Rules: Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views. Topic: There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a resp... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 原稿（第三段） 语言修改 The nonmainstream areas can do harm to[1] the society, only when people don't inquire them merely for fun, but for resolution[2] of life instead. It is ignorance because no one in the world could point out way for others, nei... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 修改范例 In deed, astrology, fortune-telling and psychic readings can sometimes provide comfort when we are feeling sad, enliven our lives when we are bored, and spark hope when we are depressed. But these pursuits are ultimately based on falsehood... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 语言修改以及内容补充 下面是2篇issue writing习作的点评，这里不仅提供了关于原稿语言错误的修改，还提供了关于题目内容的补充，帮助大家了解如何使文章的内容更加充实。 第一篇 你会相信算命术或占星术吗？也许你的回答是当然不会，那都是骗人的。可是如果有观点认为... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 目前，GRE的考生在写issue作文时普遍出现以下几个问题： 1．例证匮乏，老生常谈。在阐述思想观点之后，缺乏有力的例证去支持所阐述观点。或者总是引用每个人都耳熟能详的例证，例如目前最流行的例证有两个B和两个E，两个B即Bill Gates和Bill Clinton。两个E即Einstein... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 231当前的报告指出全国的新住宅销量在去年下降了9%，而旧房销量增加了16%。因此我们可以预见将会修缮或改造其房屋的业主比例也会增加。而且，那些买旧房的人在购房后将会有更多的富余金钱用于房屋改造。最后，买旧房的人更可能自己进行改造，而不是雇人来做。这些因素... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 231The following appeared in the annual report of a chain of stores that sell supplies for do-it-yourself home improvements. Current reports indicate that sales of new homes nationwide declined by 9 percent during the past year, while sales of exist... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 221一项为期十年的对于在骑自行车时戴头盔的作用的研究显示，10年前，所有骑车人中大约有35%报告说他们戴头盔，现在这个比例接近80%。然而另外一项调查显示在相同的十年期间，因骑车引起的事故数量增加了200%。这些结果说明骑车人因为戴着头盔而感到更安全，因而导致他... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 221The following appeared in a health newsletter. A ten-year nationwide study of the effectiveness of wearing a helmet while bicycling indicates that ten years ago, approximately 35 percent of all bicyclists reported wearing helmets, whereas today t... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 211在拥有很大的窗户而天花采光很少的Sherwood High的教室的采光好像影响了学生的学习成绩和教师的精神。记录表明在日光最少的十二月和一月，出席率下降，每日平均课程参加量减少，分数降低。教师辞职的数量在这两个月也是最多的。根据一项对于全年日照都很少的Tundra... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 211The following appeared in a memo from the Principal of Sherwood Junior High School. It appears that the lighting in Sherwood High's classrooms, which have large windows but minimal overhead light sources, is impairing student academic performance... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 201由于上个季度我们主要产品的定单增加了200%多，我们应该马上通过在Summit City建造一座新工厂来扩大生产。Summit City是新工厂的理想位置，因为那里的地产税比较低，具有可以立即购买的大片土地，以及大量尚未就业的居民。 202在最近的一次调查中，那些每周至少吃五... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 201The following appeared in a memo from the chief operating officer of the Presto Manufacturing Company. Since orders for our major product increased by over 200 percent last quarter, we should promptly expand production by building a new manufactu... 阅读全文>>

日期：2008-07-29 191现在一些药店提供超声仪器来检测中风危险的升高。在交了一定费用之后，医师在颈部插入一根探针来检测是否有血小板使连接大脑的主动脉血管壁增厚。研究者已证明动脉壁的增厚与中风危险的增加相关联，这种检测通常能够发现5%到20%的顾客有可探测的血小板增加。所有的... 阅读全文>>