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详读学校的写作说明并了解问题的重点,不赘言,不遗漏,且在要求的字数内完成。例如学校要求五百字内完成(In 500 words or less discuss ...),则全文最好不要超过五百字。如果学校要求以问答方式来 叙述(Responsesto essay questions.....,Please limit your response to one page .),即依其要求回答不长过一页。写作时应清楚明确。例如:

"I am interested in English literature" 这句话表达不够清楚,而I was conce -ntrated on Milton and Shakespeare in college" 就明白的说出了申请人的志趣及专研的范围。

"I received extensive training in physics" 这句话不够详细,"My training was in the area of particle physics"就具体多了。

"I was very active as a student representative" 最好说明曾经做什麽: 主办演讲、沟通学生与校方之意见等。

"I am attracted to your department by its brilliant faculty--"应说明对於教授的认知是从何而来,如在何处读到某教授之文章而愿受教於他, 或某位教授正在从事一项重要研究,与自己欲攻读的研究领域相同等。表达对所申请之系的课程、教师和特性有些了解,依学校之不同而提及某位任教於该校的教授、新课程或该校的某个学位有兴趣。

不要用语意模糊的句子,如 "Your esteemed1 school---"应代以学校的名字。"I will return to serve my country---"应明确的说出所要从事的到底是什麽工作等。


态度诚恳认真,不卑不亢。不用为自己的弱点道歉,譬如说 :托福成绩不高等;也不要表现得过份自信。重要的是给学校一个专业,认真的印象。



 范文1: 计算机系毕业生读书计划

    When I was a high school boy, my father undertook a task of rearranging a data processing system with computer equipment for a government office. Which increasing contact, I decided2 to be a computer engineer to satisfy my curiosity about this incredible machine.
    To realize the dream of getting into this miraculous3 world of computer, I studied very hard to pass the College Entrance Examination. According to the result of the Exam, I was admitted to Beijing University of Science and Technology, majoring computer science. A year later. I transferred to Tsinghua University, which is famous for its computer science.
    During my five-year undergraduate study in the university, I had scholarship every semester because of my excellent academic performance. Besides, I tried to spend every summer working in a computer firm to get practical experience. I have produced a small Pascal compiler and a sample computer storage system for a company. Also I joined the research work "the arrangement of computer image" for the department.
I believe the future century will be a "computer" century and the world will greatly depend on it. Therefore it is necessary for us to broad my knowledge on this part. I intend to help the development of my country in this area. emphasizing in the objectives such as office automatism, the build-up of computer network, artificial brain and CAD / CAM, etc.
    If I am able to complete my master degree within two years, I plan to continue to pursue a Ph.D. degree thereafter. As soon as I complete my study, I will come back home immediately to contribute what I have learned to my own country.

范文2: 医学工程专业转攻计算机专业读书计划

    I majored in Biomedical Engineering at Nankai University after graduating from high school. There, I took courses on Introduction to Computer Science, Computer Programming, and Microprocessor4. Therefore, I became greatly interested in the field. In my spare time, I attended BASIC Training Class and read lots of related books whenever I was free. Also, I decided to further my study in the field of Computer Science.
    After the graduation. I was hired by Tianjin Medical Equipment Co., LTD. to be a Service Engineer taking charge of the maintenance of X-ray instruments of Phillips and Siemens. Owing to the need of the work. I attained5 ASSEMBLY and PASCAL Training classes and realized more of the importance of Computer Science.
    I would like to enter your Graduate School to study Computer Programming and System Analysis as computer is definitely going to play an important role in the life of humanbeing. Upon the completion of the study, I will return to China to devote my knowledge to Biomedical Engineering, to manufacture new products to be either marketed or applied6 to hospital management and help computerizing hospital management.

范文3: 经济系转计算机系读书计划

    After my undergraduate study at Hebei University where I majored in Economics. I became a sales representative for Tang Shan Textile Co. I have worked in this position for about three years. In my work, I have witnessed the growing role played by computers in today's business administration and research. This trend became acute after the advent7 of minicomputers and microcomputers8.
    The computer programmers and engineers trained in this country cannot meet the pressing demand. I wish to devote myself to the application of computers and therefore, I have decided to pursue an M.S. degree in Computer Science. If admitted, I will concentrate my studies on the computer software.
    I have some fundamental knowledge regarding the characteristics and capabilities9 of computers in a course on the Introduction to Computer Science which I took as an undergraduate, Nevertheless, I am willing to take more prerequisite10 courses if necessary.
    Upon completing the studies, I will return to my country and seek a position as a programmer.



1 esteemed ftyzcF     
adj.受人尊敬的v.尊敬( esteem的过去式和过去分词 );敬重;认为;以为
  • The art of conversation is highly esteemed in France. 在法国十分尊重谈话技巧。 来自《简明英汉词典》
  • He esteemed that he understood what I had said. 他认为已经听懂我说的意思了。 来自《简明英汉词典》
2 decided lvqzZd     
  • This gave them a decided advantage over their opponents.这使他们比对手具有明显的优势。
  • There is a decided difference between British and Chinese way of greeting.英国人和中国人打招呼的方式有很明显的区别。
3 miraculous DDdxA     
  • The wounded man made a miraculous recovery.伤员奇迹般地痊愈了。
  • They won a miraculous victory over much stronger enemy.他们战胜了远比自己强大的敌人,赢得了非凡的胜利。
4 microprocessor ZDJxs     
  • I've got a typerwriter with a microprocessor.我有一台装有微处理机的打字机。
  • I decided to write a program for a microprocessor.我决定为微处理机编制一套程序。
5 attained 1f2c1bee274e81555decf78fe9b16b2f     
(通常经过努力)实现( attain的过去式和过去分词 ); 达到; 获得; 达到(某年龄、水平、状况)
  • She has attained the degree of Master of Arts. 她已获得文学硕士学位。
  • Lu Hsun attained a high position in the republic of letters. 鲁迅在文坛上获得崇高的地位。
6 applied Tz2zXA     
  • She plans to take a course in applied linguistics.她打算学习应用语言学课程。
  • This cream is best applied to the face at night.这种乳霜最好晚上擦脸用。
7 advent iKKyo     
  • Swallows come by groups at the advent of spring. 春天来临时燕子成群飞来。
  • The advent of the Euro will redefine Europe.欧元的出现将重新定义欧洲。
8 microcomputers 9d586e7e93514db2c23c6973518deef0     
微型计算机( microcomputer的名词复数 )
  • Microcomputers are playing an important role in our lives. 微型计算机在我们生活中扮演着重要的角色。
  • Many microcomputers do allow you to directly address a memory address. 目前有许多微计算机允许你直接访问某个存储单元。
9 capabilities f7b11037f2050959293aafb493b7653c     
n.能力( capability的名词复数 );可能;容量;[复数]潜在能力
  • He was somewhat pompous and had a high opinion of his own capabilities. 他有点自大,自视甚高。 来自辞典例句
  • Some programmers use tabs to break complex product capabilities into smaller chunks. 一些程序员认为,标签可以将复杂的功能分为每个窗格一组简单的功能。 来自About Face 3交互设计精髓
10 prerequisite yQCxu     
  • Stability and unity are a prerequisite to the four modernizations.安定团结是实现四个现代化的前提。
  • It is a prerequisite of entry to the profession that you pass the exams.做这一行的先决条件是要通过了有关的考试。