范文：控制影视暴力场景的意义

［题目］
　　The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?

　　［参考范文］
　　It is widely acknowledged that the amount of violence in films and on TV is one of the direct causes that lead to our high crime rate in our society. The voice of demanding the government to control violent scenes in media has been much louder than before. Personally, I totally agree with this voice, for it is the most effective way to reduce violent crimes in the real world.
　　First and foremost, violence on TV or in films is often portrayed¹ as extreme as possible in order to attract audiences. This will definitely set a bad example for those immature² audiences, who, lacking correct parental³ guidance, are most likely to copy the violent behaviours and commit real violent crimes.
　　Next, media, such as TV or film, is considered as the correct information source regulated by the government. It should be reporting and reflecting true phenomena⁴ in the society. Violence, as one of the facts in the real world, certainly has to be reported. However, excessive violence is offering misleading information to the public, which will exert detrimental⁵ influence to the society. For example, teenagers will regard those killers⁶ and murderers in the films and on TV as role models and copy their behaviours. It is recently reported in the news that a seventeen-year-old killed all his family members, one sister and two parents out of hatred⁷ and jealousy⁸. In the real world, we are often reminded of the harm and hurt that violence in fictional⁹ world has brought us.
　　n a word, our society is preoccupied¹⁰ by the violent scenes and plots at present. What the government has to do immediately is to take effective measures to control the amount of violence in media. Only in this way, can our society enjoy high level of security and peace.