GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文五七

33.        The author of Perks¹ Company's business plan recommends that funds currently
spent on the employee benefits package be redirected to either upgrade plant machinery²
or build an additional plant. The author reasons that offering employees a generous
package of benefits and incentives³ year after year is no longer cost-effective given
current high unemployment rates, and that Perks can attract and keep good employees
without such benefits and incentives. While this argument has some merit, its line of
reasoning requires close examination.
      To begin with, the author relies on the reasoning that it is unnecessary to pay
relatively⁴ high wages during periods of high unemployment because the market will
supply many good employees at lower rates of pay. While this reasoning may be sound
in a general sense, the particular industry that Perks is involved in may not be
representative of unemployment levels generally. It is possible that relatively few
unemployed⁵ people have the type of qualifications that match job openings at Perks, if
this is the case, the claim that it is easier now to attract good employees at lower wages
is ill-founded.
      Secondly⁶, the argument relies on the assumption that the cost-effectiveness of a
wage policy is determined⁷ solely⁸ by whatever wages a market can currently bear. This
assumption overlooks the peripheral⁹ costs of reducing or eliminating benefits. For
example, employee morale¹⁰ is likely to decline if Perks eliminates benefits; as a result,
some employees could become less productive, and others might quit. Even if Perks can
readily replace those employees, training costs and lower productivity associated with
high turnover¹¹ may outweigh¹² any advantages of redirecting funds to plant construction.
Moreover, because the recommended reduction in benefits is intended to fund the
retrofitting of an entire plant or the building of a new one, the reduction would
presumably be a sizable one; consequently, the turnover costs associated with the
reduction might be very high indeed.
      In conclusion, this argument is not convincing, since it unfairly assumes that a
broad employment statistic¹³ applies to one specific industry, and since it ignores the
disadvantages of implementing¹⁴ the plan. Accordingly, I would suspend judgment¹⁵ about
the recommendation until the author shows that unemployment in Parks' industry is
high and until the author produces a thorough cost-benefit analysis of the proposed plan.