写作训练范文讲评：周末

　　「要求」
　　周末两天的休息对于平时忙于工作学习的人们来说是非常宝贵的。请你根据下列提纲写一篇短文。

　　周末对于人们来说意味着什么。

　　每个人都有自己度周末的方式。

　　我是怎样度周末的。

　　「范文」

　　Weekends

　　Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest. For example， people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.

　　Everyone spends weekends in his own way. Within two days， some people can relax themselves by listening to music， reading novels， or watching films. Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball， wimming or dancing. Different people have different relaxations¹.

　　I often spend weekends with my family or my friends. Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends. Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge. I also go to see various exhibition to broaden² my vision³. An excursion⁴ to seashore or mountain resorts⁵ is my favorite way of spending weekends. Weekends are always enjoyable for me.

　　「评语」　

　全文思路清晰，论述充分，语言流畅易懂。用词讲究，注意了词语搭配，没有重复、堆砌之感。